This weeks six comes from Redemption, currently in submission with Noble Romance. Thanks for reading and leaving your comments. The feedback is much appreciated 🙂

The little hairs on the back of Olivia’s neck tingled as she watched the wordless showdown between Max and the stranger. A malicious sneer crossed Max’s face a second before he took a possessive step toward her and slid his arm around her waist. He pulled her close and his mouth descended on hers in a kiss much too intimate for the public eye.

“Max!” Olivia wedged her hand against his chest and shoved him away, but not before  the skunky after-taste of beer filled her mouth.

“God, you taste good,” his low throaty growl sent a chill up her spine and she took an apprehensive step back.

Well that was a macho-shithead move, why didn’t he just pee in a circle around her and be done with it already?

8 comments on “Six Sentence Sunday #11”

  1. OMG! That pee in a circle line is sooo hilarious-in-a-good-way! BUAAAHAHAHAHA! Okay, I’m crying a little. *deep breath* Melinda, I hope you’ll soon be a part of the Noble family!

    • OMG, I am so sorry I spelled your name wrong. MELYNDA! AK! (Everyone at Noble isn’t as looney as me, I promise. I have six kids. That’s totally my excuse for everything. *grin*)

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