Here’s six from the paranormal romance I’m currently writing: Bonded in Exile. The next six Sundays will run an excerpt between Riley, an Atillian fallen angel, and Emily, a Nephilim he’s been chasing. Hope you enjoy it! Thanks for reading and leaving your comments 🙂
Riley’s top lip pulled back in a sneer, flashing a glimpse of fang that made Emily’s blood run cold. His scent hit her nostrils—Myrrh—her skin crawled with the memory of his touch. Bile surged up her throat as Riley reached forward and slowly drew the back of his fingers down her cheek.
“We have unfinished business, you and me, or are you going to make your sister pay your debts?”
Oh, God…Sarah! A new wave of panic exploded inside her chest, as dark sapphire eyes danced across her face with a triumphant gleam, drinking in her terror.
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Very gruesome! I can’t wait to see what the next few Sundays bring!
Riveting!
*shudders* Nicely written six. Can’t wait to read more 🙂
This guy is terrifying, and now he’s after he sister, too? Yikes!
Luscious.
“drinking in her terror.” — Just love that. Great six. 🙂
Oh, wow. That’s intense! A lot of threat and emotion packed into this six.
Hey Melynda! Love the six (and the photo too)! Hope you have a fantastic Sunday!
OOPS! That’s not a photo. That’s your banner. LOL Sorry about that.
Oh, yes, bring in the sister and now Emily’s really screwed. Nice.
Wow! A great way to build tension and keep us all in suspense! Thanks for sharing.
Way to create tension! This six was fab! Nice job 🙂
There’s definitely tension between these two! Well done. 🙂
Beautifully written intense six!
Creepy. Very creepy.
nice built of terror. Good six. Hope she gets away!